starlight_riri

PUGO IN MY OPINION GETS KO KUNG BAKET HINDI MAHABA CHAPTERS MO KASE NAKAKATAMAD MAG WRITE NG STORT LOL PLS MAKE MORE I LOVE UR STORIES AND ALSO TANGENA POTA LANYA TONG NGA TOH FOLLW ME KUNG HINDI MO KO KILALA I'M HANNAH BANANA/RIANNA/RIRI NA FOLLOW NA KITA
                                      - THE BITCH RIRI

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Dear Chester,
                   Hi! I'm JenLisa0711 as of you know. I have read your story;"My Ships In". I have to admit..... The first chapter was good...... Not the best but good. Although,I have some complaints about it. I can also give you tips! Ok,here are my complaints and tips.
          
          1. LaQuisha and Kenneth will ONLY kiss if they are boyfriend and girlfriend. Remember,there are Green-Minded people out there and they might like the idea of your other characters having s*x and all.
          
          2. Make the chapters longer. Sure,you can make them short in the meantime but as you develop your skills in publishing books like "My Ships In",you should make them longer.
          
          There I'll be adding more complaints in the future but in the meantime,these are the first complaints. 
          
          Please take note that I,JenLisa0711 isn't threatening you but my identity is. If you already know my identity, then I'm threatening you. If you don't,then I'll tell you. I'm LaQuisha. I bet you already knew me from the start. Oh and me and Kenneth have a problem.
          
          Only me,Cristhel,and Sofhia know about it. Kenneth thinks that I have no clue about what it is. Oh,and if you tell a soul OR Kenneth, you're dead. You can tell others but one by one only andONLY if you have MY permission and if you ask me DIRECTLY and no other help.
          
          You are free to write whatever you want as long as you don't include me and Kenneth's problem,ok?
          
          Anyways stay safe and I hope your story doesn't ruin our lives!
          
                              -JenLisa0711 A.K.A LaQuisha

starlight_riri

this message may be offensive 
@JenLisa0711
            
            1. Of course you won't expect the 'best' chapter from Cheese.
            
            2. Imma beat the fuck out of his ass if he adds sex scenes.
            
            2. I mean you two act like a true couple.
            
            3.he ain't gonna make longer chapters if he only has 4 chapters and he made that book months ago.
            
            
            
            4. You ain't ho na complain sooner or later because you don't have W-I-F-I.
            
            5. If JenLisa0711 isn't threatening Cheese, but your identity, then that's the same as threatening him because LaQuisha, which is you, is in control of the account so called 'JenLisa0711'.
            
            6.I KNOW ABOUT IT. I AIN'T TELLING KENNETH OR HELL BLOCK ME AND I WON'T BE ABLE TO SEND SHIT TK HIM ANYMORE WHICH IS KIND OF SAD CUZ I CANT ANNOY HIM ANYMORE.
            
            7. Itz a buk dude not a real life threat that can kill you.
            
            TROLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLLLLL
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starlight_riri

@JenLisa0711 lollll haha tang ena pota lanya talaga to
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starlight_riri

@JenLisa0711 ssiioommaaii rice....
            SUP MOM, HEY MOM, HELLO MOP, HI MOM
            I READ IT 'MOM'
            -RIRI
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