AbcXyz172
Heyyy, U writing something??
ChenfordIsLife23
@AbcXyz172 kind of. i just had a funeral for a close family member so i have stuff going on right now sorry.
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AbcXyz172
Hiiii can you make a story after 3x6 what if chen is involved in a meth accident as "nova".
AbcXyz172
La Fiera enters the scene in 3x12, I think they can start little flirts and side eyes and staring a little in 3x6 and like small episodes but with more details of their slowromance. They almost confess by 3x12 but La Fiera comes into the scene disrupting their plans so they will confess after angela is rescued from Guatemala. We can show that Lucy in very concerned about Tim while he is in Guatemala and she is in LA and keeps thinking about him. After he returns, that night, they confess and as a bonus chapter u can add details in 4x22 episode of "Dim and Juicy" . We can show that in that episode, others at the station also come to know about them.
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ChenfordIsLife23
@AbcXyz172 i agree ppl rush it but also its hard to fit a slowburn in a story. it cant be like episodes yk? when would the incident happen like after they think they r safe, before la fiera comes in ?
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AbcXyz172
all the stories I have read so far usually 4-5 small parts and they rush very fast when infact the show is slowburn. In the episode Tim was angry at lucy for agreeing for UC work and she feels sad bcz of this. Later while arresting all Tim specifically goes to arrest lucy and asks if she was okay.
I am just thinking maybe a meth accident like the meth lab and storage malfunctions and chen is exposed. We can include near death experience and hospital admission and how Tim refuses to leave her side but doesn't admit anyhting but he is now all the more concerned and decides to pursue chen.
However, he knows his behavior and wants to be perfect and deserving for chen and embarks on a journey to make himself better. Later he asks her out and they have amazing date and sex. They tell grey and we can include some non-sexual hot romantic scenes with obvious tension between them to be close to each other.
I think it will make an amazing plot and if you can publish it soon I think it will be a hit considering starting of season 8.
Good luck!!
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person18927
Hey can you make a story about 4x22 if Tamara didn’t walk in
ChenfordIsLife23
@person18927 hey sorry, yeah im working on it already, ill proably publish it tmrw afternoon, im so sorry i have a crazy amount of homeowrk
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