Hello. Uh. I've read the first chapter of your 048/035 story. And, from a writer who is going to have a book published soon(In Spanish because it's a poetry book) and who writes scp stuff too(mostly shitpost). I want to tell you that your English is a bit weird and sounds forced when you wrote that. My English isn't the best neither, but, I have two co-writers who help me with the grammar and structure of my fanfics. Maybe you should get some help, I see talent on you.