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Cherry can you give me constructive criticism on the prequel of clairvoyance??
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CherryTheHusky
@FirefoxAnimationsOwO you should try to not overwhelm the reader by adding so many details also i feel like it just magically skipped to a new part of the story each time without explaining everything that happened in the time order
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