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@Azraeli501 why are you harassing them about THEIR book and then getting mad when they don’t respond or put Your ideas in, I’m not trying to be rude I’m genuinely curious. You wouldn’t like someone commenting on a book you wrote and telling you that you aren’t doing it right, constructive criticism is one thing but just straight up hating on someone’s book is disrespectful as hell. If you truly have that much on a problem then you should write your own book where things can get done your way instead of just telling them what to do with their own book?

@Cherry_Blossom_Babe it would be nice if you rewrite fate breaking dawn part 1 and have Seth imprint on Renesmee instead Jacob why did you do that ❓

@Cherry_Blossom_Babe I was wondering if you could do a story for me 

@Cherry_Blossom_Babe when you wrote that chapter I stopped reding it

@Azraeli501 Well, considering this book is based off of the original Twilight series and I'm writing it how I want, I think that it's just fine. I chose not to change a major part of the plot, so it would better fit my adaptation of the book as I write my fanfic. If you don't like it feel free to not read it. Thank you and I appreciate your support! Enjoy the book.

And mine some of my spelling this thing here while I'm speaking on is kind of will mess up the words a little bit and incorrect my spelling so mind it if you can and it just did it again just now and it messes up my spelling a bit try mind my mess up spelling 

@Cherry_Blossom_Babe and plus I can't read that last part and I can't we part one and two unless if you do something and I'm not saying telling you what to do but it would feel a whole lot better if you just have when that's make her up with someone else I mean nobody liked it shake of being paired up with a baby I mean why do you think that's okay that he's paired up with baby it isn't cute and it isn't okay I mean I know it was for purpose reasons but I know that you myself and everyone thought a kid I mean you have them paired up with Athena but it would have been better if he had another way to you know make sure when there's me once protected besides imprinting on her I mean that's what the TV series is aiming to do not have Jacob and print on a kid I mean two weekend find out that suggestion I had some other theories I had some you know like some Powers he could have used to make sure she wouldn't be harmed I'm I was going to tell you but after that you know I just can't help them back they're really some good Kick-Ass powers now if you're open up to here in I will tell you but you have to choose them will not choose but you know you could use them cuz I had these powers of written down I made up these powers for a character I was doing but I just never got around to using them in the story cuz I kind of was busy so I figured you could do some use with them if you want to hear them I'll tell you but kind of just you know think about it and realize that these would be better alternative than besides just in printing on her you know I'm just saying that's all

@Cherry_Blossom_Babe and by the way I'm not weeding no more of your stories because what you did have in Jacob imprint on Athena's niece I wanted Seth to be the one who would imprinted on Renesmee that was my suggestion and plus you have to know that it's not cool having chicken print on a baby nobody likes that and it would help if you just had him you know be honored to be the uncle of her instead of having him imprint on her  or get OCs  to imprint on her like Ira Black he only 14 but he would have shown up and kept his older brother from trying to Renesmee until Jacob realizes his little brother has imprinted on Renesmee
            
            But why did you decide to have Jacob still in print on monesse made knowing and I know that you was not okay with it but why why did you think that's okay knowing that that's not going to sit well with everyone who eats it I mean just be straightforward with me don't be around the bush with me with the truth on that to straightforward that's all cuz I'm trying to help you here with this and I'm not telling you what to do but it would help if you just give a little rewrite because if you do you feel much better if I feel like something doesn't sit with me I just realize I rewrite it and then I realize I feel a little better cuz you know how we lights are but we might want hurt you but then again there are some way whites that don't work but I feel like for me you're saying that if you did this we right on the story to have Jacob just stay imprinted on Bella's sister and has someone else in front of them that's me and feel like better just be honest straightforward honest with me