@Cherrywile why am I just seeing this?? Lol, i cane here coz i saw your update notif for your book and i was gonna scream where have you been, then i saw this. Well, to answer this, you are right. Well, that's why I edit my books over and over again coz i add more details and descriptions as i go. The first draft is always messy i guess, but I'm glad you still liked it. I took it down coz I'm editing from book one up again and i believe I'll continue editing until I'm satisfied with every nook and cranny. It may take me years and i still have more books to do T-T. I need to hire a manager when i start getting out there coz i have so much to do yet I'm lazy half the time