Kmaylinwrites
I've read your work. It's good wity great potential. You've to change your cover picture and the prologue as well. Write it from a perspective that's not in the story. Can be a 1st person perspective. Also, no story takes off immediately. Mine has been in works for almost 2 years now. ❤️ Keep writing and dont lose heart. ❤️
Cheyyyleah
Thank you, I wrote it originally almost 5 years ago and I’m trying to make tweaks to the story without changing it much. I appreciate the feedback so much!!!