I’ve written a complete plot summary of ‘Mistrust in May’. The story is set out, and now I’m starting draft 3. I will reveal that May suffers from some mild OCD tendencies, however there is a plot point involving that I’m still debating. The opening scene will depict her drinking the adamite (crystal substance that reacts with amylase in saliva and bacteria- Adamite is fiction but amylase is real) from a water bottle rather than a teacup, despite my ‘Hot Milk’ animation showing tea. The plot has changed so much since I posted that animation in Febuary.
As for Calvin, Historia, Amare, Estelle and Maryanne- they will be major characters in the next book. For now, the first book doesn’t have the requirements to develop every character equally in the span of one book (and remember I’m still in highschool. I lack the skill of an adult writer.)