Hii(: I just finished reading your Kellin Quinn fan fic & I absolutely love it! It's so well written and it the best fan fic I've read yet. Although, I have a few things Id like to say.. You never said the name of the band, so I'm guessing it Sleeping With Sirens, yes? Then, I noticed that you kinda overuse the word 'said'. Lastly, I like hoe you're putting the tragedy stuff together, especially the suicide one, but when one is introduced, you use 'then I got the biggest shock' or 'then tragedy struck' and it kinda kills the suspense. Sorry, just trying to help. Don't feel offended. Btw, I love Sleeping With Sirens and I think Kellin Quinn is absoutley gorgeous<3