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Hello can you please read my story: battle of invisible thorns: part 1 of rise of midnight. It's my first and my only (for now) story. Can you please comment for every part you read.id like to get some feedback.   Thank you.

Title: RAVEN
          
          Author: @Zelda_Black
          
          Genre: Action, Fiction, Mafia
          
          Best Point: Strong Female Protagonist
          
          Status: Ongoing
          
          Mature: Contains foul language, Excessive Mention of Sexual assault, Murder, Self - Harm, and Suicide, and depicts sequences of Mental and Physical Pain.
          
          Description: She traced her finger on the sharp edge of the knife in her hand. It cut her finger. Droplets of blood started coming out and some of it dripped on the magnificent white rug below, staining it. She looked up to see the lady sitting in front. She saw how the lady's happy expression changed into the one that she had come to love the most. 
          
          Fear. 
          
          She slowly leaned in, bringing the knife closer to the lady. 
          
          "N-n-noo, ple-ese don't do this" Knowing what was about to happen, the lady begged, scared, as she backed up on the couch. 
          
          She paused for a second and then stabbed the lady in the stomach with much force, looking eye to eye. 
          
          The lady screamed loudly out of pain. 
          
          She took out the knife and stabbed her again. 
          
          She leaned near the lady's face. 
          
          "This makes me a Psycho, right? She whispered to the lady as she touched her almost lifeless face with her now bloody fingers. "That's what you said. I am a psycho". 
          
          She looked up to see him standing stunned with a pained expression on his face, wanting to cry at the scene in front of him. 
          
          "Are you sure that you can handle this? "
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/261389282-raven
          
          *Note - I have just started writing the book, but have the whole story, till the end in mind*
          
          I'd love for you guys to check it out.
          Thank You.

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          Pls give it a chance

Hi, can u plz check out my poem 
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Hey !!! Can you give it a try 
          https://my.w.tt/qWI6hyxXQ7
          No pressure though :)

Hi dear... 
          
          If you are interested in teen fiction and romance, you can check out my books. "The Billionaire's daughter, till I met you and my woman my everything". 
          
          Don't forget to vote And share to your friends ❤❤
          
          Enjoy! 
          

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          https://www.wattpad.com/story/225450454

no disrespect...your book may be fabulous  but ur name I can't handle...sorry

Happy weekend, lovely. Hope you are safe. I just thought I should recommend two sterling stories for you this quarantine weekend.
          
          Chasing red: the mafia tale by EdithAnyakee 
          and 
          Lord Day and lady night by RobThier. 
          
          https://my.w.tt/5EZotOla75
          
          https://my.w.tt/mg3k0Sja75
          
          Both are fantastic reads!!!
          
          

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