Eclipse

Hi mommy 

Hii! I see you’re an avid reader in my books genre and I was wondering if you could take a look at my new novel and let me know what you think so far?
          
          If you dont want to, you’re free to delete and ignore this! I’m just looking for some feedback as it is my first novel on this platform. :))
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/369369821?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=email&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=PinkLxve