LonerTc

It's good to see you writing again. I don't know if you remember me or not, but I went by Ethelwulf over amino, and Tc The Writer over wattpad a few years back. I deleted my account here. If you're writing again, and you keep at it, maybe sins of humanity will be finished somewhere down the road. Though, I remember what you said a few years ago, low chance. But hey, you writing in of itself is a miracle. If I remember correctly I might have told you, your splatoon story has inspired me to write one similar to yours a few years back when we last talk. I'm using Team Fortress 2 as an inspirational source. The characters will be more grounded and moral in reality. The scout is the main character like Drake, except not a rude idiot like the tf2 scout. Good to see you back at writing at least. Good luck to you.

LonerTc

@LonerTc Good to see you writing again regardless. I hope you can fulfill your passion with shorter stories.
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ChiggerDrew

@LonerTc 
            I vaguely remember that. 
            I have thought about going back and finishing it but several things would have to happen/change first and I don't see that in the near future. And by this point it probably needs a complete overhaul
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Shopnil4

Just realized that I don't think I posted something here. I just wanted to thank you for writing your stories. Reading Legacy of Humanity actually got me through a tough time of my life, and I still reread it to this day.
          
          I haven't actually finished Sins of Humanity yet, since I saw you making an update post saying you were stopping it, so I was thinking about waiting until you felt like continuing it before I caught up to where you stopped.
          
          Regardless, I want to thank you again for making such great stories. Hope you've been doing well and will keep doing well.

Shopnil4

@ChiggerDrew That's alright. Still a great story from what I've read, so I'll leave the rest to imagination lol
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ChiggerDrew

@Shopnil4 
            Glad you enjoyed it. Though I will say that as of right now the odds of finishing it are very low
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allnamestakendammit

My critics for legacy and sins of humanity would’ve been: tone down the horniness of the characters, it got old pretty quickly. 
          In sins of humanity when Callie and Otome were assumed dead, I feel like Drake and Marie’s grief was glossed over to quickly. I haven’t experienced grief personally, but I feel like that would linger.
          Finally, I really enjoyed the exiled arc of Sins of Humanity but I have some criticism for Otome’s fake-out death. Personally I think Otome should’ve died when she went over the waterfall (if I remember that correctly). A death in which characters don’t really get the chance to say goodbye and whatnot is both cruel and would been pretty good for that part. It would’ve been good for Drake and Callie’s character development especially since you were kinda pushing them to be together (especially in regards to the 2 different endings you had in mind). I think Drake’s grief should’ve been more fleshed out and for Callie to be a shoulder for him to cry on. I think her mentioning that she’d be a shoulder for him to cry on was something that she mentioned near the end of legacy of humanity (it’s been a while since I read it). It would’ve made that comment a bit cheeky foreshadowing/coming full circle, and I think it would be poetic.
          But yeah that’s I have to say, thanks for making Leagacy and Sins of Humanity. You’ve given me countless hours reading enjoyment and I think you handled the concept of “what if humans survived in splatoon”  the best.

allnamestakendammit

I don’t blame you for not wanting to re-write Sins of Humanity, that would be a massive undertaking. 
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ChiggerDrew

@allnamestakendammit
            Glad you enjoyed it. 
            The hornynes I thought was toned down compared to most of the fandoms work but I digress.  Half of it was a play on what's average in Japan's media. 
            As far as her dying, that was never my intent - at least in the first arc. It was both a way to lead into the banishment arc  and bring Tartar into it with out just - oh look ocotexpansion ins there. I made a lot of mistakes in the sequel, enough that I had considered rewriting it as even what I had in the outline notes wasn't really... planned. but what's done is done and I just don't see myself going back and correcting things at this point.
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SebastinMaldonado0

Hello, here from Latin America let me tell you that I read the legacy of humanity and the sins of humanity and let me tell you that they are the best fanfics that I have read and it is something true that does not feel monotonous or ridiculous at all times feels like something credible and I thank you, thank you for being such a good writer and rather I went to English classes to be able to understand your audio book and I only hope that one day you write again as well as only you can

SebastinMaldonado0

gracias a ti por ser tan buen escritor, saludos y bendisiones desde bolivia
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