Shopnil4

Just realized that I don't think I posted something here. I just wanted to thank you for writing your stories. Reading Legacy of Humanity actually got me through a tough time of my life, and I still reread it to this day.
          
          I haven't actually finished Sins of Humanity yet, since I saw you making an update post saying you were stopping it, so I was thinking about waiting until you felt like continuing it before I caught up to where you stopped.
          
          Regardless, I want to thank you again for making such great stories. Hope you've been doing well and will keep doing well.

Shopnil4

@ChiggerDrew That's alright. Still a great story from what I've read, so I'll leave the rest to imagination lol
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ChiggerDrew

@Shopnil4 
            Glad you enjoyed it. Though I will say that as of right now the odds of finishing it are very low
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allnamestakendammit

My critics for legacy and sins of humanity would’ve been: tone down the horniness of the characters, it got old pretty quickly. 
          In sins of humanity when Callie and Otome were assumed dead, I feel like Drake and Marie’s grief was glossed over to quickly. I haven’t experienced grief personally, but I feel like that would linger.
          Finally, I really enjoyed the exiled arc of Sins of Humanity but I have some criticism for Otome’s fake-out death. Personally I think Otome should’ve died when she went over the waterfall (if I remember that correctly). A death in which characters don’t really get the chance to say goodbye and whatnot is both cruel and would been pretty good for that part. It would’ve been good for Drake and Callie’s character development especially since you were kinda pushing them to be together (especially in regards to the 2 different endings you had in mind). I think Drake’s grief should’ve been more fleshed out and for Callie to be a shoulder for him to cry on. I think her mentioning that she’d be a shoulder for him to cry on was something that she mentioned near the end of legacy of humanity (it’s been a while since I read it). It would’ve made that comment a bit cheeky foreshadowing/coming full circle, and I think it would be poetic.
          But yeah that’s I have to say, thanks for making Leagacy and Sins of Humanity. You’ve given me countless hours reading enjoyment and I think you handled the concept of “what if humans survived in splatoon”  the best.

allnamestakendammit

I don’t blame you for not wanting to re-write Sins of Humanity, that would be a massive undertaking. 
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ChiggerDrew

@allnamestakendammit
            Glad you enjoyed it. 
            The hornynes I thought was toned down compared to most of the fandoms work but I digress.  Half of it was a play on what's average in Japan's media. 
            As far as her dying, that was never my intent - at least in the first arc. It was both a way to lead into the banishment arc  and bring Tartar into it with out just - oh look ocotexpansion ins there. I made a lot of mistakes in the sequel, enough that I had considered rewriting it as even what I had in the outline notes wasn't really... planned. but what's done is done and I just don't see myself going back and correcting things at this point.
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SebastinMaldonado0

Hello, here from Latin America let me tell you that I read the legacy of humanity and the sins of humanity and let me tell you that they are the best fanfics that I have read and it is something true that does not feel monotonous or ridiculous at all times feels like something credible and I thank you, thank you for being such a good writer and rather I went to English classes to be able to understand your audio book and I only hope that one day you write again as well as only you can

SebastinMaldonado0

gracias a ti por ser tan buen escritor, saludos y bendisiones desde bolivia
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Matt_Hedgehog

I must say this one and I Will say it again, I read off of Humanity and I am a theorist and a guy who spends to much time reading and haven't spelt for hours, but I love how the story goes, and yet better fact two major favorite characters I like is Drake and Otome, I would think those two would be a perfect shipment (I know I know I'm that guy okay?) And I gotta say, humanity was one of my favorites, humans, octolings, and inklings living in one world, if I would say this once as a theorist, If only one person, JUST ONE PERSON, will survive 20k years. It would be anyone around the world, if drake and his friends can survive, so can we, if drake feel in love with Otome, I would do the same thing, and if I had to name a place where I call it home that is 20,000 years old, I would name it The United First Sole Survivor, or U.F.S.S, folks would come out and about, but if there was only one survivor left and only one last person, it can be anyone, and I ain't saying it would be me cause there's no pride in it, it could be anyone like you and your friends or family, being a survivor doesn't mean your the last one, it means your the Sole of what it means to be the last, and I do mean it. So you continue your work and make sure no one gets on your level.
          
          P.S, this took long cause I write and type and lot and I know your sleeping and I am not but hey what can I say except your welcome, Get my reference? No? Well okay than imma sleep now cause I read too much and my brain is getting too much Intelligence.

RadGamer14

There's nothing quite like your writing, me and many others love your stories. I'm glad that your Splatoon stories were the first I ever read on this website, even though I didn't know much about Splatoon lore at the time (I joined the community back in late May 2020 I think?), your story kept me hooked and I enjoyed every part of it! All I can say is, well done, and we wish you all the best in whatever you do next!