Child_3ater

"Six" will be continuing and I will finish it no matter how long it takes me. Just wanted to say that since I didn't want you guys to think I was discontinuing it or leaving y'all on such a cliffhanger.
          	I don't have much of an excuse, but all is well it's just school, getting ready to graduate, and dual English may not have been the best idea as it is a pain because there's an assignment almost everyday. However I do hope that I can use the things I've learned to improve my writing and make the story more intriguing for you all. Sorry for the very slow updates and I'll try to get one out this week since I'm on break and I'm also kinda wanting to know what happens next-  
          	Hope you all are doing well and have a great week!

Child_3ater

"Six" will be continuing and I will finish it no matter how long it takes me. Just wanted to say that since I didn't want you guys to think I was discontinuing it or leaving y'all on such a cliffhanger.
          I don't have much of an excuse, but all is well it's just school, getting ready to graduate, and dual English may not have been the best idea as it is a pain because there's an assignment almost everyday. However I do hope that I can use the things I've learned to improve my writing and make the story more intriguing for you all. Sorry for the very slow updates and I'll try to get one out this week since I'm on break and I'm also kinda wanting to know what happens next-  
          Hope you all are doing well and have a great week!

pratyush172018

hey reader if you are interested then please check out my first novel HALL OF FAME as a new writer i need your grace

Child_3ater

@pratyush172018 Love the descriptions and the way you worded things!  However if you don't mind just some ideas, instead of outright saying he died at the end of the chapter maybe word it differently to make it more dramatic or give it more emotion and don't be shy to write a sentence or more for it as you can give a little piece of background before completely explaining it later on in the story if you plan to do so.
            As I don't know much about the story and don't know what you're plans are for it I don't know exactly what to suggest, but this is just what I think after I read it. Great work so far! Keep it up. ✨
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Child_3ater

New chapter coming out soon! Sorry I haven't been updating much, just had a lot going on and teeny bit of writer's block, but we're currently finishing up the next chapter. ️
          Hope you all are doing alright and good luck to those who are in the last months of school!