Just a teenager trying to get better at writing through some feedback on social media and hard work.
If you're a reader ➡️ Any critiques are really apprieciated, no matter how harsh.
If you're a writer ➡️ Any advice you have I'll take gladly.
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Chill_Writez
Nov 12, 2023 03:03AM
Hey guys, thanks for checking my profile out and giving my stories a chance. I'm a new writer starting out and I want to build my skills in writing. I'd love any feedback you guys can give on my stor...View all Conversations
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