Hello! Im gonna straight to the confession: i love your characters, love love and love. I want more of them, more of your stories. Its wonderful. Your writing and the world, its fresh and gives nice feels, like a treasured storybook. It is a treasured storybook to me haha. and they aren't cheesy, not in the slightest, so you obviously easily won my heart. Now.. because you said you like constructive criticism, i will try to give you one as a thank you in hope to make you happy, though im a reader mostly, not a writer.. so i might actually not really helpful. but, here goes.. i feel these kids' storyline are a bit rushed towards the end (except faye's), the pace is like fleet fleet and then hop hop hop hop. i think it will be finer if the details and description (or history leak) were added a bit more.. and regarding the wording, sometimes im went around twice at a sentence to catch the idea.. you might want play around with more words beautifully.. sorry if i sound snobby.. but thats what i think might be useful, youre welcome to take or to leave it. ;))
Thanks for the delicious read! Keep up the splendid work! You have secured a purchase of your every book's hardcopy (if you want to publish it in the future overseas it is). Thank you again and keep writing!
