ChloeJattan

I’m still here! Some people liked my book and gave me feedback so I’ve decided to do this, I still have a few chapters written that skip between multiple povs which I have been told is hard to keep track of because there are so many characters soooo I will start the next chapter in third person omniscient and see how that changes the flow. If you guys like it, then we will use it throughout. Keep in mind this book is not edited. 

ChloeJattan

I’m still here! Some people liked my book and gave me feedback so I’ve decided to do this, I still have a few chapters written that skip between multiple povs which I have been told is hard to keep track of because there are so many characters soooo I will start the next chapter in third person omniscient and see how that changes the flow. If you guys like it, then we will use it throughout. Keep in mind this book is not edited. 

ChloeJattan

Dont know if anyone will see this but I'm totally discouraged and will be taking my book off wattpad. I thought I would get some constructive criticism but I'm not getting that. I will keep writing and have started the publishing process so maybe you guys will see it one day!