addi newton

Dude , this is not what i mean't by writing a book , i still have no idea where a person is starting to talk and stop. You haven't broken it into paragraphs , so its just this long ass sentence. You did the POV's wrong as well. The Fucking book needs more detail and spelling. Too many spaces between the periods and commas. And a huge ass tip , Sentence start with capital , bruh.

Honey , I'm sorry to say this , but Your book "Why?" is kinda horrible. Starting off with puncuation , i have no idea where a sentence starts or ends , or when a person starts talking or stops. Everything is written poorly , I wouldn't keep writing. Start a new book start out fresh , take a few lessens in typing and puncuation.  Tip-sentences start with a capital , And chapters aren't just one paragraph. It was hard to read what you wrote cause all the letters were jumbled together and my brain went crazy.