ChloeRid1e

Definitely recommend, very good book
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/74817865

Artemis_Halo

Hello! I'm actually the author of the forgotten potter! (the one you voted for) First of all, thank you so much! Second of all, could you give me some feedback? I'd love to improve!

ChloeRid1e

@Artemis_Halo no problem have a good day
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ChloeRid1e

@Artemis_Halo thank you. Your welcome for the vote it is a very good story. Unfortunately, I don't have much feedback as I'm not too critical nor am I good enough at writing to criticise others. I am dyslexic and struggle with writing so I have no tips or feedback for you besides keep up the great story and enjoy yourself 
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