Chlonyx

Waiting for my work to reach the right audience ... if there is

rainxclouds0312

heyy!!...can you review my story and give feedback on how's it and where should I improve?  :))

rainxclouds0312

@rainxclouds0312 Sure, I made few changes just now. I hope you'll like them
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Chlonyx

@rainxclouds0312  You're welcome. Feel free to drop a review on my work too. I'd like to hear your suggestions about it. :)
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rainxclouds0312

@Chlonyx yes. I'm getting it, and you're absolutely right on this. Thank you so much for your feedback. I appreciate it alot. Please provide me more of your feedbacks in future. So that I can improve my story writing <3333
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