You have come up with a really good story with really good dynamics. If there are certain factor that you think can make the story better, I’m sure whatever you do will elevate what is already a really good story. I’ll be waiting for the new edited version. Also, no rush. Take your time. You can tell when there’s effort when it takes time! ;)
I absolutely love your Marvel/Dr. Stone story, it's amazing. The amount of 'electricity' between Senku and Kiera is absolutely amazing. Please keep up the amazing work.