ChocolateLover1017

She Nearly died
          	Knowing she's alone 
          	The people she 
          	Loved had gone 
          	Hard to move on 
          	Thinking they were true 
          	But really they used 
          	Her kindness 
          	and showed no 
          	Remorse for anything
          	Felt happy to have 
          	Broken her 
          	Wish her luck 
          	Before darkness 
          	Consumes whats 
          	Left of the girl
          	No hope 
          	No love 
          	No reason 
          	To stay in
          	A place 
          	Where you 
          	Don't matter  
          	
          	Thoughts?

shadowhunter_17

Wow. Hi there. I just happened to come across your account because i was looking for my past account from a couple of years ago (which was something about chocolate lover). And well initially i thought this one was mine because it said "first name: Andria" and i was like, "well i might have put that because my name is Andrea." and i'm also 16, born november 17, 1999. Anyways yeah, just thought that was pretty cool. (Nickname's Andy btw)

ChocolateLover1017

@shadowhunter_17 I just saw this for this for the first time and that is kinda cool 
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ChocolateLover1017

She Nearly died
          Knowing she's alone 
          The people she 
          Loved had gone 
          Hard to move on 
          Thinking they were true 
          But really they used 
          Her kindness 
          and showed no 
          Remorse for anything
          Felt happy to have 
          Broken her 
          Wish her luck 
          Before darkness 
          Consumes whats 
          Left of the girl
          No hope 
          No love 
          No reason 
          To stay in
          A place 
          Where you 
          Don't matter  
          
          Thoughts?

ChocolateLover1017

So I had to re start my book and all I have up is my new written prologue and chapter thirteen I need to get the book in order and keep it straight so I'm sorry if anyone was tryint to read or had already liked what had I am just going to re write and hopefully you guys still like it 

Eirini_Lidou

Hey Andi i have a poetry book. If you want check it

Eirini_Lidou

@ booksisoursalvation  thanks Andi 
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ChocolateLover1017

I'm not a professional writer and I don't have much experience with it so my book Andi the siren I have a pretty good feeling about it I just hope more people start to look at and my maybe if it's good then people will have given my a chance at starting something good so please if anyobe could read it that would be awesome 

TomorrowNeverDies18

Hey

ChocolateLover1017

@TomorrowNeverDies18 towards people like trying not to be mean 
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