ChocolateUnicorn0521

Hey guys.
          	
          	Big change. I decided to unpublish my story - I Choose You - for now. Before you guys start screaming *cough*ame,fangjia,tyt,celine*cough*, I have my reasons.
          	
          	1) School. 'Nuff said.
          	
          	2) I feel that my story could have been written better. I feel that I went too fast with the development of my characters to the point that I, myself, don't connect with them too well.
          	
          	 I have planned out the entire plot of the story before I even started to write, but I never took notice of the small details I needed and that my story lacked. I'm a perfectionist. I only settle for what I claim to be the best, and I can tell you right now this story wasn't written to its best. 
          	
          	I love writing, not just stories but whatever pops in my mind. I have literally 8 journals that have been doodled and written in completely to this point. 
          	
          	So, I'll plan it out. I'll rewrite the whole thing, and when I am sure that its the best, I'll share the story with all of you. 
          	
          	
          	
          	

nctmylove

@ChocolateUnicorn0521 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO oh and unicorns don't exist . =) 
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ChocolateUnicorn0521

Hey guys.
          
          Big change. I decided to unpublish my story - I Choose You - for now. Before you guys start screaming *cough*ame,fangjia,tyt,celine*cough*, I have my reasons.
          
          1) School. 'Nuff said.
          
          2) I feel that my story could have been written better. I feel that I went too fast with the development of my characters to the point that I, myself, don't connect with them too well.
          
           I have planned out the entire plot of the story before I even started to write, but I never took notice of the small details I needed and that my story lacked. I'm a perfectionist. I only settle for what I claim to be the best, and I can tell you right now this story wasn't written to its best. 
          
          I love writing, not just stories but whatever pops in my mind. I have literally 8 journals that have been doodled and written in completely to this point. 
          
          So, I'll plan it out. I'll rewrite the whole thing, and when I am sure that its the best, I'll share the story with all of you. 
          
          
          
          

nctmylove

@ChocolateUnicorn0521 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO oh and unicorns don't exist . =) 
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