Chocolaty Locket

Hi ChicolatyLocket, I am really liking your story.  I am new to writing superhero stories and I was wondering if you could check mine out and give me some feedback. It’s called ‘The Adventures of Cosmic Girl: Vol. One’

Adventure, heroes, and fun all wrapped up in eight cute young women who used to be faeries. https://www.wattpad.com/story/158890647