@Chris22346
Hi guys, I need some advice to continue the 2 stories and I want to make them as faithful as possible to the original works.
@Chris22346 i only read the naruto original but not all sooooo my advice is to inovate try to include as mutch of conversation that is seperaded from the main text and if you can add pictures to show how places and charecters look (itcan save time on writting)
Wow a knew story
@SageCinn Hi, I started this story 2 years ago and now I'm fixing it. Okay, I'm glad you're reading it.
Just wanted to ask if you'd continue to check out my story you voted for the first three but I haven't seen you since buddy.
@HassanH212076 Hi, I'm so sorry but I've read very few stories these days. So now I'm going to get your story. Thanks for reminding me.
yo chris remember me?
Hi guys, sorry but this story will be put on hold for a while. In the meantime I will try to correct all the mistakes I made while writing the chapters and any doubts or problems. So give me time and I will try to improve the story to the best of my ability.
@Chris22346 thank you so much!!!
Hello! I hope you're doing well. I'd love it if you could check out my story. No worries if you're unable to, and feel free to delete this message if you need to. Have a great day!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/352777699?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=i_am_music_criticism
Hey i have a concept for your new story?
Would you like to write?
Concept is basically
Minato & Kushina is way older here
Their first child will be same age as Kakashi
His name will be memna
Then same canon stuff but tere this time kushina will give birth to Twins
Naruto & mito
Minato will seal kyuubi in mito only
& Menma will seal extra kyuubi chakra left by kyubi behind in Naruto
Kushina will because this kyuubi claw killed Minato & memna
Kushina will abandoned Naruto
Naruto will be without last name till time skip
Naruto will carry namikaze name
Naruto kyubi seal chakra seal will break during retrieval arc
So jiraya will totally abandon him only focusing on mito
Menma dying moment he saw a vision of Naruto Future so he left some thing for Naruto to help him
Menma will leave him holy knight Summoning Contract ( the clan of warriors ) & notes of flying thunder god
He will be train by Neko & summoning World
Naruto character & look after time skip will be like boruto
Cool collection ruthless
Naruto will get golden byakugan from holy knight Summoning Contract they were the summons of hamura ōtsutsuki
Menma found it somehow in deep sea water
He left for Naruto
He gave Itachi all instructions so when Itachi saw mito left with jiraiya for training & he put menma plan in action
yo
