Dear readers, I found the first draft of the first chapter of the original Lásko story.
In this first version, Angelique is a nurse who takes care of Johan while he is in a coma after he's been shot the second time.
He wakes up to find flowers near his bed, and he discovers they're hers (she does it with every lonely patient she has). Remorseful, he then tries to commit suicide, and she stops him, and then protects him.
He wakes up at night when she is there to see her and talk, and they fall in love. Then, some gangsters enter the hospital to kill a mafia boss and she tries to save the hostages. When she is in danger, he appears and saves her.
Then she gets in the way when they are going to shoot him, and he pushes her away, and that's when the rest realize what's happening.
The rest of the story is more or less the same. Except Hank, he was added to the story later
Would you like me to post it after finishing the story or do you like it the way it is? Or maybe post another whole version with this different first chapters?
Tell me in the comments!!
Disclaimer: the majority of the characters are from Naoki Urasawa's anime "Monster" and his book "Another Monster", but ANGELIQUE NO, many people are asking me when in the series she appears. Angelique and her friends and family are completely my creation, they do not appear in the series, the manga or the book.