ChristianCalo22

Should I add ash to the Naruto/Pokemon story 
          	
          	I've been thinking long and hard to this since this story is about both (y/n) and Naruto journey to find their path 
          	
          	So what you all think 
          	
          	Yes, for him to be in it and journey together for him to improve, but different scenarios.
          	
          	Or
          	
          	No in this one

Monifahhearnes

@ChristianCalo22 I just wanted to know that for your one of your stories Naruto x Pokemon you put the same girl name each of Naruto and the main character’s harem and her name is Kotohime
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ChristianCalo22

@Monifahhearnes thanks I fixed it
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ChristianCalo22

@Monifahhearnes thanks for letting me know I got it fix
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Starzal

@ChristianCalo22
          Hola amigo
          Como esta
          ?
          Hope ur doin well
          Just dropin by to check on ya
          And
          Here 4 ur usual compliment on ur stories
          Good work on the shadow monarch slave story
          Usual hint of cringe
          But again
          Everything on this platform has some amount of cringe
          No matter how little
          Lol
          Either way
          U did fine

Starzal

@ChristianCalo22 
            O
            Ok
            Lol
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ChristianCalo22

@Starzal no it was an example if he fuses an armor form of a monster that doesn't fly
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Starzal

@ChristianCalo22 
            Awesome
            And
            Ok
            And
            Random question 2 that
            Was that just an example 
            Or 
            R u actually adding buster blader
            Cuz I didn't c that in any of the archetypes 4 the decks that were picked  out here
            ?
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Starzal

@ChristianCalo22
          Hola amigo
          
          U saw the new slave manga chapter
          ?
          Things just escalated suuuuper quickly

ChristianCalo22

@Starzal its just I'm not feeling to write one not yet actually
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Starzal

@ChristianCalo22 
            Yeah
            Having not done 1 this whole time and them being a decent good bit popular 
            Made me feel like asking
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ChristianCalo22

@Starzal like sword art online and others like that?
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Starzal

@ChristianCalo22
          Sup amigo
          Hope ur all good
          
          Just finished reading the 1st chapter 
          And have 2 say
          Decent amount of action (its just the start, so 2 b expected) 
          And
          Really also enjoyed the cure little scene with nei getting worked up with the ruby carbuncle 
          And of course
          Good friend bond with yuuki
          Only complaint 
          Like with a majority of ur other stories 
          U tend to make the MC look/feel like the bigger guy of the original series MCs
          But
          With u making him a decent bit older than yuuki in this story
          I find this a decent exception 
          So not TOOOO big of a complaint from me
          
          Overall
          I had a lot of fun
          U really did wonders

Starzal

@ChristianCalo22 
            All good amigo
            Just trying to offer anything that sounds like anything helpful 4 writing tips 
            
            And
            Again
            Cmon
            Even u have to admit that gets a teensy bit cringe urslf
            Right
            ?
            Lol
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ChristianCalo22

@Starzal well is a habit since new people wanting to know but I'll make sure for this one to not repeat the explanation
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Starzal

@ChristianCalo22 
            Almost forgot dude...
            Another thing 2 ask
            This explanation his magic and card will b the only time ul do it right
            ?
            Asking since
            If u do multiple times
            Its probably gonna feel more lije information dumping if he does it in front of other characters who haven't seen it themselves 
            Which is kinda tiring to go through repeatedly 
            
            Example 
            In ur cross ange coordinator story
            When u had the character explain the whole story between the coordinators and his original universe when he first met the norma was nicely done
            But when u had him do it the exact word by word explanation when he met the dragons and they had the same awe and surprised reactions
            Didn't feel all that good
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