Hello everyone. I finished the editing of the Pirates! The last chapters are online. I've split the old one into two chapters. The former chapter 13 is now divided into 16 and 17.
The epilogue is a little refined, too.
All in all, there have been more changes than I estimated in the beginning, resulting in two more chapters due to more detailed descriptions and interactions between the characters. I deepened the relationships a bit and gave the story a hopefully, better, cleaner flow.
It's still a short story, but I really like it and am happy about the edited version.
Maybe you, someday, take a look and witness the silly, funny, lovely relationship of Captain Xiao Zhan and his "princess" Wang Yi Bo.
Love and hugs
Tina