In my most viewed book, T.E.L.O.W., "Chapter 3: The Mysterious Dragon" has been reedited and updated. I added a couple more words for clearer reading! Also, if you could tell by rereading the beginning, I changed more words, character names, and I put the paragraphs to the middle and spaced out each paragraph or speeches.
I changed the names of Hannah to Alani, and Justin to Noah because I thought it would fit where they were born with the names of their states. Also, coming up is Chapter 4, which is next on the list to be updated and edited.
Just a warning, chapter 3 has somewhat of an inappropriate language or behavior, but the next chapters have more of that. So please don't yell at me, because I'm really sure this book is set to mature, which means there will be gore, blood, violence, inappropriate language and behavior.
Also, another heads up, most of the images I use are not mine and I might change that in the future to just having the images be drawings of mine that best represent the chapters instead of me just trying to find the best image for that specific chapter. Anyway, I will continue editing today and see how far I will get and let you all know and give you some updates as to what I am doing.