Hey there! I was wondering when you have the time, can you please read a story of mine? Here’s three that I need some criticism on:
"A New Maid And a Beautiful Bachelor Don’t mix!" romance/humor
Evett Castillo finds herself working for one of the most handsome bachelors in England. The only problem though is the fact that he takes pride in making her life a living hell.
"Never Meant To Be" romance/ supernatural/ angels/demons/
Cecilia Sophie was meant to marry a man she never met by her forceful parents, but that was the last straw. In the late of night she manages to run away from her home in hope of finding the freedom she longed for. Unfortunately though, that was the day when she realized some things aren’t meant to be.
"Beautiful Beautiful" fantasy/romance/ supernatural
Adora is a Halfling. With the blood of a shifter and witch running through her veins, she finds herself not welcomed in her village. Now on the run, she finds herself in the falling for the shifter Prince who that happens to rule over the Kingdom of the west. Seeing that he's looking for a mate and she has no place to go, what will happen between the two?
It would make my day if you could comment on how they are :)
Thank you,
-Silverlove