Chyoko202

I'm going to do some edits on my story, Survival, next update probably coming tomorrow or the day after! I thank you all for your patience, I apologize for the wait :< 
          	I've just had so much on lately, (uhh, it seems like that's the case 95% of the time but anywaayyys...) I promise that I will try to write and update when I can. 
          	I think I'll be more free for the next couple of weeks, tho I can't confirm as things can change at any time, and my plans and schedules are all still pretty hectic.  
          	Tysm! :)
          	-Koko

Mogitin

Hey thank you for Following, if you ever get a chance I released my first novel recently (Violet Eclipse), I'm currently looking for feedback on this first arc and hope that you and I can become friends as I continue to familiarize myself with this landscape.
          
          Adversely if you have anything to direct me too as far as your own work I'd be happy to take a look.
          
          have an awesome day!
          
          (I know we've interacted some already, but I send this to everyone lol)

Chyoko202

@Mogitin I'm super busy atm sorry, but I promise when I have the time I'll try to send you some feedback. Ty for reaching out to me :)
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Chyoko202

I'm going to do some edits on my story, Survival, next update probably coming tomorrow or the day after! I thank you all for your patience, I apologize for the wait :< 
          I've just had so much on lately, (uhh, it seems like that's the case 95% of the time but anywaayyys...) I promise that I will try to write and update when I can. 
          I think I'll be more free for the next couple of weeks, tho I can't confirm as things can change at any time, and my plans and schedules are all still pretty hectic.  
          Tysm! :)
          -Koko

Mogitin

Hey There Koko, I went through some of Survival. Your doing good thus far, I just don't think the hyper fairy tale-esk type story's are for me haha. 
          
          Violet is a Great Character, with very clear flaws, I can see some great scenes of her growing out of coyness in future chapters,
          
          I think throughout the first chapter, I kept asking the question, How much money does this family have? where are they? Does everyone in their area have similarly lavish home settings.
          
          There seems to be a lot more focus on the dynamic of Violet and how her family interacts with each other.
          
          I think your doing good.
          
          I could give you further critique but I think I'll save it for when you ask. I hope you continue to write! your doing very good thus far.
          
          -m0gers

Chyoko202

Life Gambles will have to be on hold 4 the moment, so sorry guys, but I'm going thru a big writer's block with that one atm. Also I'm ngl, I really can't say when I'll continue with that one :(
          However, on a more positive note, I'll be starting a new story called Survival, will be posting the first few chapters in the next few days!
          Tysm! :D