Heller fabulous people who happen to find my profile, I am posting a rough draft for one of my story's feel free to mock. I am also very willing to read material that other writers have when they need another opinion. I also kinda think I created the evil character kill squad I dont know but hey if ya find a story where I have called out for the kill squad feel free to respond. Dont forget to check out Mythic Academy its a roleplay that I will not be taking down so have fun.  Im happy to be back and should have the next draft of my first story up soon.  Im so sorry if it still seems crapy im currently reaching out to freinds who write as well to edit my work