CindySuLabWon
Hello
Selene_Nova
I read your story and it was nice, can't wait for more~~
Oh, and you might need to read the other good story for good improfment.
Not that I dislike it but, maybe more people will understand your story even more clearly.
But then again, your story is nice, for a beginner like you. Cause for my first time, it was much worst than yours, it took me months to remake everything.