Cindyquil Love

@CindyquilLove  I didn't get the notification you replied..QwQ
          	  
          	  Instead, when doing dialogue, I think that it's best if you give it a separate line to itself...
          	  
          	  Ex: Paragraph something idk, but end with a sentence OwO
          	  
          	  "*Insert dialogue here*"
          	  
          	  New paragraph here.
          	  
          	  
          	  Just advice, that might make reading the story a pleasant experience for dem eyes.
          	  
          	  (I love this story so much though ><. I'mma give it a shoutout ><)

@Lynnette_Chan
          	   Again thank you so much for reading! Honestly I was really nervous to write anything, I thought that I would make something boring. But happy with the positive feedback 
          	  
          	  Yeah as for the bold text I was having a bit of difficulty/nervousness thinking I needed to have them bold when the characters talked, idk for some odd reason I thought like it wouldn't be understood if that makes sense? But then I later realized that it was difficult working with the bold text when I wanted to include for example video or voice recording moments, or sometimes when they would emphasize something like in the recent chapter of the story, but I will definitely go back and fix all previous chapters.
          	  

@CindyquilLove Feedback? I personally will say, for your first story, it's amazing! UwU It's so underrated as well QwQ.
          	  
          	  Everything is beautiful, but there are some minor tweaks here and there I think would be nice.
          	  
          	  One thing that really stands out to me, is how you bold your dialogue.
          	  
          	  In some cases, it's nice for emphasizing a certain emotion the character demonstrates, but for the majority of the time, the writing can get slightly confusing to read. I don't think the bolding is necessary.
          	  
          	  But this is my personal opinion, I honestly love your entire plot OwO