Cinn_a_bun

I need your honest opinions and thoughts. I worked hard on this description for something since I scrapped yet another story but I really like this one and the other version that will (hopefully) come into existence if someone would like to be my editor, but without a further a do I give you this
          	
          	Cricket Elerias was a carefree pre-teen living in the kanto region, losing everything to a house fire in a months time.
          	
          	A distraught Cricket is forced to leave behind everything she has known for a new life in the galar region with a man who claims to be her father.
          	With that she has so many unanswered questions,why was he not there for all twelve years of her life? Why show up now? Did he not want her?
          	
          	Join cricket on her wild journey in the galar region as they face the new life, how will she face her fears both old and new ? Find out in...

DanielGriffin2

My ex was a manipulative person but I'm happy with my fiancee and can't wait to leave and start a new beginning in life, and truthfully I don't miss her one bit (I know you can see this). My fiancee is more helpful than she ever was and is capable of physically being there for me when I need a hug or just a physical presence. I don't miss what we had but I do wish that we didn't have what we had, I was young and naive and easily manipulative and I dismissed all of the red flags from our other partners at the time so I would like to apologize to them for any trouble that I caused and wish them good intentions and prosperity.
          
          Have a good night or morning 

Cinn_a_bun

I need your honest opinions and thoughts. I worked hard on this description for something since I scrapped yet another story but I really like this one and the other version that will (hopefully) come into existence if someone would like to be my editor, but without a further a do I give you this
          
          Cricket Elerias was a carefree pre-teen living in the kanto region, losing everything to a house fire in a months time.
          
          A distraught Cricket is forced to leave behind everything she has known for a new life in the galar region with a man who claims to be her father.
          With that she has so many unanswered questions,why was he not there for all twelve years of her life? Why show up now? Did he not want her?
          
          Join cricket on her wild journey in the galar region as they face the new life, how will she face her fears both old and new ? Find out in...

Cinn_a_bun

Love filled vent
          
          I love how my current love lets me squish his face and kiss him.
          
          He is so cute when he's flustered.
          
          Absolutely love our height difference.
          
          I love how he understands my pain.
          
          I love how he is a dork like me.
          
          I love his beautiful big brown doe like eyes.
          
          I just really love how happy he makes me 
          
          

Cinn_a_bun

(part 2 and 1  except part one is the same but I fixed the mistake at the end)
          
          A hooded figure ran through the streets barely missing a step as they finally made it to their destination a light blue house but due to the night sky it was black
          'finallly I can see my little princess' the figure thought as they opened the door and quietly went through the house .it was quite inside aside from the occasional hum of a music player.at last the hooded figure made their way upstairs to a light blue room with a assortment of toys and diapers scattered around the room. They quickly made their way to the crib in the middle of the room and peered in there inside the crib layed a giggling baby girl wrapped in a fox fur blanket.upon seeing the baby the figure smiled and they removed their hood it was a young man who looked to be in his early twenties with emerald green eyes and aburn hair. "Papa's home princess" the man said making the girl coo and babble....