@Asor_Darkfire Alright, I have read it! Let me just say I'm loving it so far. The only feedback I would have to give you is to maybe dive into the character's personalities a little more, so we can understand what's going on in their head - and maybe some personal appearances? Like, Piper has blonde hair or whatever her hair color is - I think going into personality and traits would be great for the story. But otherwise, it's going splendidly and I'm loving it!