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I'm not sure if you continue to use wattpad. I read your story my beloved beast. It needs some revising and also to be spread out more. The story to me felt rushed and somethings were not made clear. You have 3 events that have already occurred, the info on Sophie came off as random and just tossed in. The other two I have commented my view on them. Don't want to spoil it for others.
          My overall advice is:
          Clean
          Spread out
          Clarify 
          Add more information
          And keep the book going. 
          It can be a better book once you sit down and really take a look at it to improve it.
          
          Please do not take offense. This is just my opinion. Others may differ from me. 

Please everyone go and read ny new story!!!
          Update tonight
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Hey everyone I just updated 
          "My Beloved beast" its a shocker. I suggest you go and read it and comment and star it so I can upload it ASAP

Hello everyone in back. I've been having family issues . But the important thing now is I'm back. For my stories I don't know what I'm going to do. I might continue or start over. Please I need you opinions.

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