jewel_louise
@ClassicGirl thank you for checking out my story "His Baby" and voting on it so far :)
ClassicGirl
@jewel_louise lol no its fine I was just a little confused because in the book it wasn't really shown or said that he was good to her and then turned bad in the beginning he was just randomly bad
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jewel_louise
@ClassicGirl Eve and Alex were only dating for a few months before he went to jail. He was always possessive over her but he didn't lay a hand on her before now.That is why In chapter 2&3 Eve is hurt and confused at how hostile he is being with her. She continues to question herself throughout the chapters whether or not Alex is showing her the "true him". I guess I didnt do as good a job at clarifying that as I thought I had. My apologies. More of their past is revealed as the story goes on. I just didn't want to be one of those writers who gave up too much in the first few chapters. I like the idea of my characters being a little bit of a mystery (hopefully not too much!). I now realize everyone isn't like me in that sense :P!
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ClassicGirl
@jewel_louise idk I just felt like I was missing something so was he abusive before he went to jail?
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