ClaudiaGotthardt4

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i liked it. but it was sooooo messy, i literaly thought it missed chapters, stil do. who are his parents after all? who are his siblings? wil he be pregnant, when?  how did the previous pack get away with so much bullshit? so much is missing from the plot. but alas, it was partially good. (excuse my typos, ist late, and english is not my mothers language) (what i said is not intended to be rude, but to be constructive.)
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/32269202

ClaudiaGotthardt4

this message may be offensive 
i liked it. but it was sooooo messy, i literaly thought it missed chapters, stil do. who are his parents after all? who are his siblings? wil he be pregnant, when?  how did the previous pack get away with so much bullshit? so much is missing from the plot. but alas, it was partially good. (excuse my typos, ist late, and english is not my mothers language) (what i said is not intended to be rude, but to be constructive.)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/32269202