Cliche_Cracker

"I been treading a long way to find you. "

edagkc_

I also recommend my books to you that you can check out, I will be very happy if you would, because I'm working my head out to achieve many people entertained of my works :)
          
          Thanks..

edagkc_

@Cliche_Cracker thanks its my pleasure. :-)
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Cliche_Cracker

@SunRisePuppy Thankyou so much. I promise, when I finish the book I'll dedicate my first and last Chapter to you. 
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edagkc_

@Cliche_Cracker Sure, to get ideas you can always check out my works or other authors, a few tips could be to start with a dramatic scene, or something exciting. If you want your start to be something calm then you could add some tension to build it up to something interesting.
            
            What you could include in your book...
            
            o Tension                    
            o Drama
            o Descriptive language
            o Picture/Video
            o 1st/3rd person
            o Speech
            
            A few writing techniques to make your stories entertaining...
            
            1) Adjectives - descriptive words
            2)Personification - imaginative words
            3)Alliteration - word that has the same letter e.g. Cilche Cracker
            4) Short sentences - this one builds a lot of suspense 
            5) Onomatapeire - sounds e.g. Boom, Pow, Crash, etc...
            6) Punctuation- , . ! " ; : / ' 
            7) Similes - Describe something as something e.g. The magic hall was as massive as the size of a whale.
            8) Emotional language - opinions of the characters announced to the readers. 
            9) Adverbs - doing actions with ly endings e.g. She ran quickly.
            
            I hope this helped, sorry if it was too long, but this is how I make myself clear with people and I am a very big helper. :)
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edagkc_

Hey, since I've read a few of your comments on some books that interested me, such as My Stolen First Kiss, I recommend a book named Started With A Lie. It includes Teen Fiction, which is what most teens love about books, and is very fascinating to read. You need to have to check that phenomenal book out, and I'm sure you'd enjoy it!

Cliche_Cracker

@SunRisePuppy Sounds good. I'll let you know more if I enjoy it...
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