Hey, I'd like it very much if you could give me some critique.
http://www.wattpad.com/749579-nomad
One thing I should mention though is something I frequently get questioned about; I tend to reveal a lot of things as the story goes on. And I mean a lot of things. I will reveal why Greenwood doesn't wear shoes, why she's strong, why Gabriel is staring at his boots, among other things. I'm sorry for taking up a bunch of room on your comments, but I've been yelled at for it a lot of times. Ha
Thank you, if you do critique it! :D