Dali Mora

Hello sorry to bother you but I will appreciate it if you read my story and giving me some feedback thank you very much 
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Hi love, how are you?
          I'm sorry for bothering you, but I was wondering if you could take a look at my book "Blue Dot".
          Thank you so much.
          Have a good day.
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