ClifforxSmile

Yo for anyone who cares I just posted the second book to my fanfic called Mascara and the second book is called Running Mascara. Please I hope this one turn out better, fingers crossed xx

EricaxTeenFemslash

Hey, it's so Awesome to see that you love All Summers End as much as I do! My favorite movie as of now. I'm sorry if my comment came as a bit harsh- wasn't trying to be cruel, just trying to constructively criticize. I find that when you write fan fiction, it helps to put your own spin on the story line, and not just change the names of the characters. Just my opinion though. Great effort!

ClifforxSmile

There were just a couple of things that you wrote that I didn’t understand but it’s always okay to have an opinion. I just think that I do change a little and maybe it’s because I’m following the script and that might be why most of the lines are the same. I just didn’t want the story to flake out too much you know ? But my goal here was only to see what the movie would be like in a book form I guess. Thank you for sharing and I appreciate it very much <3
• Reply