@CliftonMatuszewski Hm....So in your prologue, a girl just bit a guys neck,right? Start from that. Why did she bite him? What will he get out of it? Is this good, or bad? How does this affect the rest of the people?
@IggyIsMyGit never mind i just screwed that up he can't be that because he isn't a monster i want to make him a vampire but that doesnt go with my prologue.
Ok so emile (the main character) just killed his sister. He doesn't know how it happened. He thought he had blacked out only it was a red haze. He woke up in a pool of his sisters blood. This has happened before he got away with it. He was a freak unknown to himself what he actually was (a vampire wink wink). (he doesn't drink blood thus going into a blood rage and killing)