darkhybr1d
I like your book 'the day the dead rise' but I feel like the zombie appeared too early. It was kind of contradicts the part where Jayne says "from my calculations, it shouldn't be any time soon..." And boom! a zombie appears on the door. I think u should work on that. Anyhoo, great work and please check out my book WANTED, I'd really appreciate it. Don't hesitate to tell me if you find anything wrong with it. P.s send me your social media details, I'd like to know u better... keep in touch ^_^
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@mohammed_0304 Thank you for the feedback! I appreciate it. when I get the chance I will definitely check out your book. sorry, I do not have social media. Hope your book does well!
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