Your story is so well written that I didn't even need to have English as my first language to love it.
I genuinely enjoyed it, the details and the storytelling. It's the first time that a Kurokura story really has the personalities well captured, since they're complex characters.
Honestly I really loved it, it's so underrated. I don't know why you don't get the recognition you deserve. PLEAAAASE UPDATE IM DYING (╥﹏╥)