Thank you for your feedback. It's exactly what I look for feedback... I do feel like the first two chapters need more oomph, especially the first. I'm trying to think of how to make them more a 'hit'... About the in-depth description, I'm working on that too... This is my first novel btw... thanks again for your time and comment. hope you enjoyed it
Thanks you SO much for all your votes for Persuasion In the Pantry!!! You are amazing. I hope you will continue to read and enjoy the story. If you would like access to the hidden chapters just hit that follow button. :)