laigo004

Your reading list is amazing. Hope you have a look at my Romance story. don't forget to comment your feedback :) thx
          
          She Said I Do (But She Don't)
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/90032808-she-said-i-do-but-she-don%27t

laigo004

@ginnppie608580 thank you so much.
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ClumsySoulll

@laigo004  I'll support you lol the way. Let me know if I can do anything to help 
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laigo004

Thank you for your feedback. It's exactly what I look for feedback... I do feel like the first two chapters need more oomph, especially the first. I'm trying to think of how to make them more a 'hit'... About the in-depth description, I'm working on that too... This is my first novel btw... thanks again for your time and comment. hope you enjoyed it
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InaraRose

Thanks you SO much for all  your votes for  Persuasion In the Pantry!!! You are amazing. I  hope you will continue to read and enjoy the story. If you would like access to the hidden chapters just hit that follow button. :)