I'm your fannnn :D
Whatever We Want is well written, someone said though, and I agree, that you need to slow down a little and let me catch up as to what's going on. But overall, I think it's a good start.
Could you maybe check out my stuff? I uploaded a story, it's called Zero Gravity. Zero Gravity is about a girl name Clover that can, well turn off gravity. It's still in it's infant stages, but I hope it can go somewhere... :]
Comment, vote or maybe even return the favor and fan me?
It would mean so much :]