Phire666

I really appreciate you reading  my story  til the end even though  I read your whole story, I would like to say it was an interesting read, I thought it was well written with good fantasy elements, I could tell it was a tale of a fable of sorts.  Please let me know what you think of my book after you finish it, and if you like you can tell me what you think so far.
          as for how long  and word count , I always say make every word count, what matters is the  story.  I'm hoping to start uploading the second story

Coco_da_cat

Oh that’s great! I’ll be sure to finish your story soon, but it is sweet seeing how it’s all getting tied back after the battles have been fought.
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Uditasree

Hi! Sorry for disturbing,  just wanted to know if my forms are accepted in Datura reviews. Thank you :)

Uditasree

@Coco_da_cat no need to rush them. Take as long as you would like. I'll complete the payment soon. Hope you are having a great day :)
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Coco_da_cat

No, thank you for reaching out to me! Wattpad doesn’t send me notifications on these things… I’ll try to complete the reviews as soon as possible, but I do have two other reviews queued up as of now.
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Coco_da_cat

After I finished editing my second chapter, I realized its word count is nearly 5,000 words (I want to aim for 4,000 as a max in all my chapters). Of course, I'm going to be rereading it and attempting to trim it down, but even if it's long afterward, should I split the chapter in half, or keep it as is?

Coco_da_cat

@Phire666 Thank you, I will keep that in mind! Excited for the new book, and I’ll finish Vitamin Bullet soon :)
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Phire666

@Coco_da_cat if you are going to write long just make sure  every word counts  lol. How are you  hope you are well and thank you for continue to read my book , if you have a new book I will start o read that. i will be uploading my second book on here  soon.
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Snowlander63

@Coco_da_cat I would split in half — removing too much information can convolute ideas
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Snowlander63

你好!!我来了!!你知道我:)

Snowlander63

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            (对啊,你的汉语真好。)
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Coco_da_cat

@Snowlander63 你得reply或者它们不发给我notification 
            
            (My mandarin is so good)
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Coco_da_cat

谢谢!我还没edit很多。。。
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Coco_da_cat

The first edited chapter of Twisted Destiny has gone up with an extra surprise as well!
          
          There were a lot more changes than I anticipated, but I do not plan for major plot changes in the book. The first chapter may look a little different than before, but I feel I was certainly able to improve the quality :)

Coco_da_cat

@Phire666 Thank you for your patience! I’ll be sure to read more soon.
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Phire666

@Coco_da_cat  I'm caught up on your book I read your epilogue.
            no worries take your time on my book if you like to finish.
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