Cocoa-Kisses

Girl I need a new chapter rn.

I loved ur book so far!! I’m only on chapter 10 rn but it’s so good :) genuinely the only feedback I have is to always add more detail, when u think you’ve added enough always add more! Like if your just slightly mentioning that ur character maybe like idk went to the park, say a bit about the park to give a bit more insight to the readers. 
          
          I am totally loving it tho, it’s such a great book <33

I'll create 20 secs videos and promote it on my Tiktok account where I have many book lovers for more visibility

Y'all should be proud of me. New chapter dropped!