CocoonedDaoist

This story is one I've been working on relentlessly and i have to say im very much satisfied with the prolouge. https://www.wattpad.com/story/138903905

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你好成员。 它是我，了不起的长辈。我爱情小说文字; 我不是太伟大的在它，但是我尝试。感到自由评论。
          (Hello fellow members. It is I- The Great Elder. I love story writing; I'm not too great at it but I try. Feel free to critique.)
          
           三军可夺帅也，匹夫不可夺志也。《论语》 - An army can conquer a general , but no man can rob one of his ambition.
          If my English is off: PLEASE ADVISE!!!